高二短文改錯(cuò)篇一：高二英語上冊(cè)名校短文改錯(cuò)天天練4

高二英語上冊(cè)名校短文改錯(cuò)天天練（四）

10

One day Daddy and I was going for a walk around the

lake while a girl rode past us quickly. Suddenly we heard a cry for a help. The girl had fallen into the lake with her

bike. Daddy and I ran quickly towards her. We manage to pull her out the water. Then the girl asked us if we could help getting the bike out of the water. Then the girl asked us if we could help get the bike out of the lake. Daddy wasonly too ready to help him. When we pulled her bike out，

she rode away even with saying “ Thanks ” to us. 9.

I felt quite disappointing at her deed. 答案及解析

1.was 改為were

2. while 改為when , 本句用到be doing…when 短語

3.去掉a

4. manage 改為managed ,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該前后一致

5. out 后加of

6. getting 改為get , help do sth “幫助多某事”

7. 正確

8. him改為her，人稱應(yīng)該一致，指前面提到的女孩

9. with 改為without

10. disappointing 改為disappointed

11

Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking，he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen

smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room,

Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed,

he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later，Jack's mother

Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got somewater and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson.“I'll give up 9.smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.答案及解析

1. and 改為but， 前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

2. 去掉in， 這是典型的中國式英語

3. 正確

4. Heard 改為Hearing

5. back后面加to, goback to somewhere 回到某地

6. smoke改為smoking， can’t help doing sth “情不自禁做某事”

7. smell 改為smelt， 時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該前后一致

8. sleep 改為asleep或sleeping

9. up 改為out， “put out the fire”撲滅大火

10. in 后面加a “in a low voice” 低聲地說

12

One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa are

feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy because it had enough food and water. Li Ming.did not

know why not. The next morning on his way to school,

Li Ming saw some birds flew in the sky. Then he thought

about the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his

grandpa to set the bird free. When he got to home, he said

to his Grandpa,“Birds also need friends!” To his delighted , his grandpa agreed.The bird set free. Grandpa and the children

were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky.10.

答案及解析

1. are 改為 were， 因?yàn)榍懊娴腛ne Sunday Morning 已經(jīng)說明故事發(fā)生在過去，用過去時(shí)態(tài)

2.正確

3. because 改為though ，前后是讓步關(guān)系

4. 去掉not

5. flew 改為flying，這里用到了see…doing 詞組用法

6. about 改為 of， 這里應(yīng)該是“想起”的含義

7. 去掉第2個(gè)to

8. delighted 改為delight ， to one’s +抽象名詞“ 令某人…”

9. set 前面加was ，這里應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)關(guān)系

10. in 改為 into 這里應(yīng)該是“飛入空中”

高二短文改錯(cuò)篇二：高中英語短文改錯(cuò)常見錯(cuò)誤

短文改錯(cuò)常見錯(cuò)誤類型

1. 謂語動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤是歷年考試的重點(diǎn)和熱點(diǎn) 常見動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤類型有

① 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過去時(shí)錯(cuò)用； ② and 前后動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不一致;

③ 主謂不一致; ④ 缺少動(dòng)詞,特別是be動(dòng)詞;

⑤ 第三人稱單數(shù)形式錯(cuò)用; ⑥ 主動(dòng)語態(tài)和被動(dòng)語態(tài)錯(cuò)用。

1）（did 改為do 屬于 ①）

2）As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.

(visiting 改為 visited錯(cuò)誤類型屬于②)

3） There will an important game next month.(will后加be錯(cuò)誤類型屬于④)

4）One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.( ③ 主謂不一致)

2. 名詞的常見錯(cuò)誤

單復(fù)數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)用；注意區(qū)分名詞是可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)；或根據(jù)名詞前的修飾語或謂語動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)來判斷。 ① I’ll get good marks in all my subject.（subject 改為subjects）

②（word 改為words）

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.（knowledges改為knowledge）

3. 連詞錯(cuò)誤

連詞包括關(guān)系代詞、副詞，并列連詞and/ or/but等

（一般考查從句關(guān)系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether ）

① I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (錯(cuò)用了who的所有格形式改為whose)

② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(此處應(yīng)該是并列的關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折，but改為 and)

③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.

④ When I was a child, rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained.

4. 冠詞錯(cuò)誤

誤用a和an（根據(jù)單詞的因素來判定）；誤用a 和the（固定搭配，各自單獨(dú)使用的地方）

多余的冠詞或則少冠詞。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改為the the same 是固定搭配)

② As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of pants.（mountain是可數(shù)名詞需用冠詞，所以加 a ） ③ My teacher advised me to keep my dairy.

④ I hope you have pleasant journey.

5. 形容詞和副詞錯(cuò)誤

1) 系動(dòng)詞后用形容詞（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動(dòng)詞 smell /feel）

2) 詞性的誤用形容詞修飾名詞修飾 實(shí)義動(dòng)詞，形容詞和副詞，過去分詞用副詞

① I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. （time是名詞 所以要用形容詞wonderful修飾）

② My pronunciation was terribly.

6. 代詞錯(cuò)誤

1）代詞的主格和賓格（I / me; He/him; She/ her; We/ us ;They/ them ）

2）反身代詞（myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves）

3）代詞的單數(shù)和復(fù)數(shù)

4）多余的代詞和少代詞

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. (express oneself,

me 改為 myself )

② One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (加it)

③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.

④ What’s more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.

7. 非謂語動(dòng)詞的常見錯(cuò)誤

1）不定式，動(dòng)名詞作主語，賓語。

2）and 連接的不定式或動(dòng)名詞前后一致（尤其距離較遠(yuǎn)時(shí)），

3）介詞后用動(dòng)名詞ving形式作賓語。

4）某些動(dòng)詞后要求接動(dòng)名詞或不定式。

① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (enjoy 后需接動(dòng)名詞 talk--talking)

② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(作主語 改為 going )

③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.

④ I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.

8. 介詞錯(cuò)誤

1）詞組中的介詞誤用，2）介詞意思理解偏差，3）介詞的多用或少用

① There are too many people among my family. （among 改為in in my family 為固定搭配）

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （去掉 at ）

9． 習(xí)慣用法要記住

主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。這也是歷年高考常考點(diǎn)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。 例如：It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and… of

We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves.of

10． 邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注

與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤。如稱謂上的張冠李戴，人名、地名、時(shí)間、方位等方面的錯(cuò)誤，常是這類錯(cuò)誤的考查對(duì)象。例如：

The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. their

First, let me tell you something more about myself. 去掉more

… no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. everyone

除了上述錯(cuò)誤類型外，�？嫉腻e(cuò)誤形式還有：連詞but, and, or和so的用法錯(cuò)誤（可以歸類為邏輯錯(cuò)誤），以及冠詞的用法錯(cuò)誤等。例如：

She was smiling but nodding at me. and

It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or

We may be one family and live under a same roof. the

短文改錯(cuò)解題思路和檢查原則

1）句中各部分的結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整，特別是每個(gè)句子要有動(dòng)詞；（句子結(jié)構(gòu)與句子成分）

2）謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；

3）非謂語動(dòng)詞的用法；

4）名詞的單、復(fù)數(shù)，格的使用是否正確；

5）定冠詞和不定冠詞是否正確；

6）代詞的格和性的使用是否有誤；

7）定語從句中關(guān)系代詞、副詞是否準(zhǔn)確無誤；

8）并列句中的并列連詞、主從復(fù)合句中的從屬連詞用的是否得當(dāng)。

短文改錯(cuò)解題四原則

1）改動(dòng)以最少為原則 2）虛詞以添加或刪除為原則 3）實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則

4）以保持句子原意為原則

短文改錯(cuò)解題步驟

1）通讀全文，掌握大意 2）整句分析，逐行推敲3）反復(fù)通讀，復(fù)查驗(yàn)證

注意：答題規(guī)范！

高二短文改錯(cuò)篇三：高二英語短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)二

高二英語短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)二

▲ 按改錯(cuò)題的正確格式改正下列短文中的錯(cuò)誤。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。

改錯(cuò)一

We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day’s study.

改錯(cuò)二

Never shall I forget the writing class presented to our English teacher

today.

Yesterday Mr Wang, our English teacher, told us that many other

teachers would visit writing class he would present to us. We were looking

forward to it. It struck us as a big surprise was that Mr Wang, who was used to be punctual, didn’t appear when the school bell had rung. The teachers sit behind the class were quite puzzled. We were quite worried about him,

wondered what might have happened to him. Five minutes late, Mr Wang showed out in front of us! On the blackboard was the writing titles: When

Our English Teacher Was Later for Class… Only then we realize that he had intended to be late!

改錯(cuò)三

I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I

can’t stand the great pressure.

Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and take at

least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Besides, we don’t even have enough sleep.

There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of

examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.

改錯(cuò)四

Dear Xiaohua,

It is four days since Mother accepted the operation.She is feeling much

more better. The doctors told me the operation was successful, but because her old age she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family as soon as possible. You needn’t to come here. I’m able to look after Mother myself.

You’d better send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily.

Yours,

Xiaohui

改錯(cuò)五

One afternoon，when I were on my way home，the weather changed

suddenly. Dark clouds were gathered.I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella with me.It soon started to rain.Just when I was hurrying home，I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei，a good neighbour of mine.He offered to share his umbrella to me.We walked all the ways home.Without Liu Wei's help，I would have got wet to the skin.How thankfully I was for his help!

改錯(cuò)六

There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled

by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single

ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not

only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train，they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.

改錯(cuò)七

Dear editor，

I am a high school student. A few days before，one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, but failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is more important than the results. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.

總結(jié)與反思：

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Key to Test 1

1. wanted? want 2. you? we 3. consist?consists 4. time? times

5. should ∧ brave: be7. Because?If/When 8. study 9. good? well 10. before?after

[解析] 6. Knowledge is power：知識(shí)就是力量。 9. keep well：保持身體健康。 Key to Test 2

1. to?by 2. visit ∧writing: the 3. It?What 4. used to 5 sit?sitting

6. wondered? wondering 7. late?later8. out?up 9. titles?title10. then∧we: did

[解析] 3. what引導(dǎo)一個(gè)主語從句，意為：令我們很是吃驚的是??。8. show up：露面。10. 注意倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。

Key to Test 3

2. although?because3. lesson ?lessons 4. take?spend

5. Our? We 6. that ?what7. have?be8. many? much

9. we∧often: are 10. go ∧university: to

[解析] 1. in need of ：需要。 5. 根據(jù)句意，是“我們學(xué)生”不是“我們的學(xué)生”。

Key to Test 4

1. accepted→received 2. 去掉more3. because后加of 4. other→another

5. say→said6. and→or 7. family前加the 8. 去掉to 9. myself前加by 85. happily→happy

Key to Test 5

1. were改為was 2. gathered改為gathering 3. so 改為because或as

4. umbrella 前加an 5. of去掉 6. find 改為found 7. he 改為it

8. to 改為with 9. ways 改為way10. thankfully改為thankful

Key to Test 6

1. ticket 改為tickets 2. traveled 改為traveling3. and 改為 or 4. enjoy前加to 5. save 改為saves6. one 改為ones 7. enjoy改為enjoying

8. not去掉 9. were改為are10. rapid改為rapidly

1. before改為ago 2. friend改為friends3. the school 的the去掉

4. change前加to 5. of 改為for 6. good 改為 well 7. I 改為he

8. leaving 改為 left 9. that改為 whether 10. needed 改為need

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