短文改錯lihuaisan篇一：2016高考英語短文改錯一輪練習(1)及答案

2016高考英語短文改錯一輪練習（1）及答案

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Dear Peter，

I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country.

I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours，

Susan

【參考答案：】

Dear Peter，

I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend,a girl in her early ， and with interests similar to mine. In my mind，she is someone who isin traveling, swimming，and playing table tennis. ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share ∧ her our traveling experiences,whatever we have in common. And I believe I with improve my English by doing so and learn more about country. I look forward to from you soon. Yours.

Susan

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Dear Li Lei，

I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and eollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, it's good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four

years.

Sincerely Yours，

Han Meimei

【參考答案】：

Dear Li Lei，

I am writing to my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and eollment by the Peking University. I know you ∧ worked very hard in the past have

years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort rewards. I am sure your parents are proud of you. I just want you to know how I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, will bring you a good chance to learn top professors. ， it's good for you to study withsuch many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.

Sincerely Yours，

Han Meimei

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Dear David，

I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow some other books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I

arrived my dormitory, I couldn't find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago. But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

【參考答案】：

Dear David，

I'm writing this letter to express myapologies to you forthe book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also some other books in the libraryI left. Unluckily,

when I arrived∧ book. I searched all the my atdormitory the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised . But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can my apologies. Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

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When it came to city and country life，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages. For city life，you know，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time，there are many great opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately，living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.

For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which is both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides，the communication is easy.

【參考答案：】

When it to city and country life，I think theyhave their own advantages and disadvantages.

For city life，you know，the traffic isconvenient that you can arrange your life and easily.At the same time，there are many great for you when looking for jobs.Also，opportunities

there is no doubt ∧ the quality of life is fantastic. ， living in cities，you will suffer

thatmuch stress and heavy air pollution.

For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful，which both good for your health.However，it is inconvenient for people to go out. Besides，the

communication easy.

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Dear David，

I read your message on the website coolworld.com say you would like to make friend with a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School. I am also interesting in the environment and would very much like to your friend. My dad work for the local government

department，which is responsible for things like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area.I would also be happy to host you for a guest in my house so that you can find out about China and the environment here for myself.

Let me know that you are interested. I look forward to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

【參考答案：】

Dear David，

I read your message on the website coolworld.comyou would like to make with a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the

environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at Hongxiang High School. I am also in the environment and would very much like to ∧ your friend. My dad be

for the local government department，which is responsible for thingslike cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area. I would also be happy to host youa guest in my house so that you can find out about China and the environment here for . Let me knowyou are interested. I look forward tofrom you soon. Best wishes!

Li Hua

短文改錯lihuaisan篇二：2016最新高一短文改錯系列(一)

2016年最新高一英語短文改錯練習集錦系列（一）

請你修改下列作文 文中共有10出語言錯誤，一般每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或者修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（︿），并在其下面寫出該加的詞

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( / )劃掉

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞

注意： 1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2 只允許修改10處， 多者（從第11處起）不計分

1

Time spent in a bookstore can be most

pleasant, if you are a book lover or merely to buy a book as a present. You may even have entered the shop just to find a shelter from a sudden shower. However the reason, you can soon become totally unaware of your surrounding. You soon focus a certain book, and usually it is only much later when you realize you have spent too much time there and must hurry off to keep some forgotten appointment. This opportunity to escape the realities of everyday life is the mainly attraction of a bookstore. A music shop was very much like a bookshop. If it is a good shop, no assistant will approach you with greeting. You needn’t buy something you don’t want . In a bookstore an assistant should remain in the background until you have finished reading . Then, and only then, is his services necessary.

(內蒙古呼和浩特市高一上學期期末模擬)

2

Last night it snowed heavy. When Susan and I got up this morning, we found the whole garden was covered with thick snow. So we decided clear the path. We got two spades but began our work at once. We both worked so hard that the path was clear soon. See this , our father felt very surprising. He smiled happily at us , telling us that we have done a good job and that he was proud for us . Finally my father gave us some pocket money as a reward for the Spring Festival. Susan and I was happy because we both had got the money through labors.

(呼和浩特市第二中學高一上學期期末模擬)

3

Last Sunday morning , when I was having a walk in the park near my home , I came across a crew made a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. He was right there in the front of me! I could hard believe my luck---not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

(遼寧省實驗中學高一下學期期初考試)

4

Dear Mr Liu,

I am Li Gang and was admit to Tsinghua University. My family was poor that there was not enough money for me to continue my study. But you offered the needed money to help me enter into Tsinghua. Because I really want to say thank to you.

Mr Liu, you not only help me out of trouble , but also taught me how to be a perfect man. You have set a excellent example to me. I will study hardly and do what I can to help those that are in need.

In the end , I promise not to let you up, and really thank you again for your help.

Yours sincerely,

Li Gang

( 貴陽市普通中學高一上學期期末考試）

5

My hometown , that stands beside a wider river, is a beautiful place. There are about fifty thousands people in it. The streets are wide and straight, and there are many new houses and shops along it . But at one time my hometown was very poor. Life was good for a few rich family. Most of the people have not enough food to eat and houses to live. Everything has changed now. They have put up factories , theaters ,schools or flats. They have also built a modern hospital and a large hall that can seat two thousand people . On the river, boats busy come and go day and night. They carry the products to all the parts of the world.

(遼寧營口市高一上學期期末考試)

6

I should be very pleasant if you could come to my home and stay with us for a few days on the summer holidays. My native village is much beautiful. I can imagine the time when we are going to spend together. Every morning we shall take a walk in the neighboring hills, where we can enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs singing by the birds . In the afternoon , we shall go for swim in the river. At night we shall sit in the yard, observed the star in the sky. Please let me to know what you think about the plan, but I do look forward to your coming to my home.

(甘肅蘭州一中上學期期末考試)

7

Music and songs play a important part in our daily life. For example, they can bring we pleasure and make up happy. However , they can help us improve our study efficiency. I was fond of listening to songs and music very much, but my favorite song is Country Road. The lyrics and music bring me into a beautiful world in that I am loved and cared by Grandma . What’s more, they make me think of my wonderful childhood was spent in my hometown and I can still remember the game played with my young fellow. In a word, once enjoying, the song will never be forgotten.

(河北石家莊市高一上學期期末考試)

8

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy . He didn’t want share things with other people . For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. A game of tennis making him very busy！ He didn’t care if something he did made people angrily. For instance, on a cold night he played strongly and loud music till 4 o’clock in the morning. But he is different now. He often helps Grandma with houseworks , Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

( 江西南昌市三校聯(lián)考高一下學期1月考試)

9

The day before yesterday , I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday , so there was many people . Under the help of the shop assistant, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave when I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous , but I tried to think of a way to help him. Suddenly a good idea came me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes . As I expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who

quick walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.

(黑龍江哈六中學高一上學期期末考試)

10

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hot , but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them , big drop of rain began to fall. When I come back into my house, it was raining more harder and harder. Then I heard a loudly sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.

（大連市二十中高一上學期期末考試)

Answers :

第一篇

1第一句：if 改為whether2 第二句：去掉第一個a3 第三句：However 改為 Whatever 4第三句： surrounding 改為surroundings

5 第四句 ： focus 后加on6 第四句： when改為that 7 第五句：mainly 改為main 8 第六句 was 改為 is9 第八句：something 改為anything 10 第 十句：is 改為are.

第二篇

1 第一句：heavy 改為heavily.2 第二句：去掉it 3 第三句：clear 前加to4 第四句：but 改為and5 第六句： See改為Seeing 6 第六句：surprising 改為surprised7 第七句：have 改為had8 第七句：for 改為of 9 第九句：was改為were 10 第九句：labors改為labor.

第三篇

1 第一句：made改為making 2 第一句：actor改為actors3 第二句：but改為 so4第二句: get 后加it 5 第三句：have改為had6 第三句：everywhere改為anywhere7 第四句：disappointing改為disappointed 8 第五句：去掉the 9 第六句：hard改為hardly 10 第六句：had改為have. 第四篇

1 第一句：admit改為admitted 2 第二句： poor前加so3 第三句：去掉into 4 第四句：Because改為So 5第四句：thank改為thanks

6 第五句：help改為helped 7 第六句：a 改為an 8 第七句：hardly改為hard 9 第七句：that改為who 10 第八句：up改為down

第五篇

1 第一句：that改為which 2第一句：wider改為wide3 第二句：thousands改為thousand4 第三句：it改為them5 第五句：family改為families 6 第六句： have改為had7 第六句：live后加in 8 第八句：or改為and 9 第十句：busy改為busily10 第十一句：去掉第二個the

第六篇

1 第一句：pleasant改為pleased2 第一句：on改為in3 第二句：much改為very 4 第三句：去掉when或when改為which/that 5 第四句：singing改為sung 6 第五句：swim前加a7 第六句：observed改為observing

8 第六句：star改為stars 9 第七句：去掉第一個to10 第七句：but改為and

第七篇

1 第一句：a改為an 2 第二句：we改為us 3 第三句：However改為Besides/Moreover 4 第四句：was改為am 5 第四句：but改為and 6 第五句：that改為which 7 第五句：cared 后加for

8 第六句：去掉was或者was前加which/that9 第六句：fellow改為fellows

10 第七句：enjoying改為enjoyed

第八篇

1 第二句：want后加to 2 第三句：them改為it 3 第三句：去掉where或者where改為which/that4 第四句：eats改為ate 5 第五句：other改為others 6 第六句：is改為was 7 第七句：making改為made 8 第八句：angrily改為angry 9 第九句：strongly改為strong10 第十一句：houseworks 改housework

第九篇

1 第一句：where改為which/that2 第二句：第二個was改為were

3 第三句：Under改為With 4 第五句：去掉but或but改為yet

5 第六句：came后加to 6 第七句：purposes改為purpose 7 第八句:give 改為gave 8 第八句：quick改為quickly9 第九句：hear改為hearing 10 第九句：him改為me

第十篇

1 第一句：a改為the 2 第二句：sudden改為suddenly3 第四句：but改為and4 第六句：out后加of 5 第七句：drop改為drops 6 第八句：come改為came 7 第八句：去掉more8 第九句：loudly改為loud

9 第十句：that改為what10 第十句：broke改為broken

短文改錯lihuaisan篇三：高考英語短文改錯三個附答案

一：

Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school． Disappointed although I felt at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom, found the teachers impatient and considerate．Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided to make the best it．I worked hardly and got along well with my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available．Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me to motivated．My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.

二：

College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

答案：College students have a little（few ）ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to （去掉to）pay the fees. Some students may apply to（for ）a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student（students） can win a scholarship. By（In） this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their（my） fees because they are（∧not ） rich enough. Beside（Besides）my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach（teaching） some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to（that）I can easily win a scholarship.

三：

You can guess the meanings of unfamiliar and important words in a reading passage by using a following strategies．Think about how the new word was related to the topic of that you are reading about．Identify which part of speech the new word is with looking at how it fits with the another words in its sentence．Look at how the word relates to the rest of the informations in the paragraph surrounded it．Use of your knowledge of prefixes, suffixes, and word roots identify the basic meaning of the word．

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