高中英語短文改錯(cuò)及答案篇一：高考英語短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)題及答案

(一)

Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.

As everyone knows, it?s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.

The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.

The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,

we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy

taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.

The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

at the moment my head touched the pillow.

（二）

Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.

According to studies, many children spend more time watching television

than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not

be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries

much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be

very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.

On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all

planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三）

I?m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players

we?ve won several games. There will an important game next month.

But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn?t

play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time

preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.

But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports

and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had

no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.

(四)

When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .

The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and

tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me

to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100

words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper

as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote

a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and

reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word

were a great encouragement to me.

（五）

Dear Ralph,

I?m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as

shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me

to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as

a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.

I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked

to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at

once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn?t

seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?

Yours,

Xiao Wei

（六）

On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.

I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum

and some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even go

out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.

You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concert

cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to me

as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.

All right. That?s how I' m going to do.

（七）

Dear Susan,

I?m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won?t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.

You won?t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every

30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will

be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to

a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we?ll talk with our plan for the weekend

over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

(八)

You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.

It?s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books.

Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person

Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such information

like how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.

（九）

Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which

is both interested and fun. And every year more and more people start

a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can

even last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy because

they are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters

from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So once

you?ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the

Stamp Collectors?Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.

（十）

Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there

are still many people live in poor conditions. They make their lives

by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school

because they have not enough money to send their children to there.

Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?

The answer lies on the population explosion. A president

of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for

the poverty because we used to ?produce? child without limit.”

Although this few words sound simple enough, they have

clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

（1）第一行：two-days 改為two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a

第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改為us

第五行：visiting 改為visited第六行：pictures；passed

第七行：去down 第八行：and改為but第九行：去at

（2）第一行：with改為on第二行：many改為some 第三行：because of

第四行：刪去 be；read改為reading第五行：programs第六行：noisy 第七行：On改為In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改為really

(3) 第一行：so改為and 第二行：will后加be

第三行：player 改為players；then改為now 第四行：once改為any；刪去in 第五行：to改為for 第六行：go改為going； 第七行：was改為is 第八行：their改為his

(4) 第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一個(gè)in第三行：anything改為everything

第四行：my改為a；去掉should第五行：talk改為talking 第六行：me改為myself 第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改為read；word改為words

(5) 第一行：of改為from第二行：quietly改為quiet第三行：well 后加as；to改為at

第四行：happy改為unhappy/sad 第五行：that改為why；talked改為talk 第六行：stranger改為strangers第七行：since改為but第八行：去掉about

(6) 第一行：劃掉myself ；a 改為the 第二行：visit 改為visiting 第三行：my前加of第四行：excited 改為exciting第五行：So改為But

第六行：cost改為costs；giving改為given第七行：are改為is第八行：how改為what

（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the第二行：although改為because / as

第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改為minutes；rightly 改為right 第五行：or 改為and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改為about

第七行：Having 改為Have

（8）第一行：kinds 改為kinds of ；minute改為minutes 第二行：have改為having

第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改為There ；person改為personal第五行：informations改為information；easily改為easy

第六行：are改為is 第七行：what改為how

（9）第一行：age改為ages 第二行：interested改為interesting

第三行：your改為their；what改為which/that

第四行：lifetime前加a；are改為 is第五行：nowhere改為everywhere 第六行：for改為with；So改為But第七行：去掉in

第八行：exist改為exists

（10）第一行：去掉a第二行：live改為living第三行：thing改為things第四行：去掉第二個(gè)to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改為in第七行：us改為we 第八行：child改為children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改為clearly

高中英語短文改錯(cuò)及答案篇二：高中英語短文改錯(cuò)解題技巧

短 文 改 錯(cuò) 技 巧

“短文改錯(cuò)”題是各類考試中的一個(gè)重要題型。盡管該題難度不大，但仍有一些同學(xué)在做此類題目時(shí)不得要領(lǐng)，因而得分甚少。本文結(jié)合高考試題(出處被略去)，對“短文改錯(cuò)”題中的常見錯(cuò)誤加以分析，從中找出命題者設(shè)置錯(cuò)誤的規(guī)律并介紹一些解題技巧。

名詞方面的錯(cuò)誤多指名詞單復(fù)數(shù)形式的誤用，可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞的錯(cuò)誤，名詞所有格中“’s”的誤置等。例如:

1. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests.

2. In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.

3. ... you’ve been settled down in Boston and are getting used to the local ways of life.

4. ... but she marked strictly on student’s actual performance ...

動詞錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中所占比重最大，它所涉及的錯(cuò)誤包括動詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤；易混動詞的用法錯(cuò)誤；動詞的第三人稱單數(shù)錯(cuò)誤；動詞的非謂語形式，以及動詞的句型搭配錯(cuò)誤等。在改錯(cuò)題中，動詞方面的考查比例較大。例如:

1. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon ...

2. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.

3. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill.

4. I’ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport.

這類錯(cuò)誤多指誤用形容詞修飾形容詞，誤用副詞修飾名詞，誤用形容詞修飾動詞，誤用形容詞或副詞的原級、比較級和最高級以及誤用帶-ly的副詞與不帶-ly的副詞等，特別注意根據(jù)上下文該用比較級而未用的“暗中比較”。例如:

1. They came back lately and had some tea.

2.... you always gave me specially attention ...

3. ... they fly down immediate and catch them without delay.

4. Yes，it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from ...

5. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.

6. Last year, my English teacher proved to be the more popular in our school.

短文改錯(cuò)中出現(xiàn)連詞就要判斷連詞用的是否正確，是否符合句子意思；連接的是詞還是句子，是否符合邏輯關(guān)系。此外如果是平行結(jié)構(gòu)就要注意前后時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、詞性一致問題平行結(jié)構(gòu)常借助與并列連詞and, or, but, not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等，though不與but連用，because不與so連用等。

1. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water.

2. I became very active but made new friends.

3. My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are kind and polite.

4. While they find fish come to the surface, they fly down immediately.

5. Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again.

這類錯(cuò)誤主要包括形容詞性物主代詞與名詞性物主代詞的誤用，關(guān)系代詞、連接代詞的誤用，代詞主格與代詞賓格的誤用，代詞單數(shù)與代詞復(fù)數(shù)的誤用，各個(gè)不定代詞之間的誤用，反身代詞與代詞賓格之間的誤用，代詞的指代錯(cuò)誤，定語從句中多用代詞等。

1. ... the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves.

2. a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can wait patiently above the sea for quite a long ...

3. If he spends most of his time playing about in the way that he used to as a child，they will go hungry.

4. That night, we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted ...

5. I just smiled to me and thought ...

6.... your life in your country is quite different from me.

7. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting.

這類錯(cuò)誤多指漏掉介詞、多用介詞或介詞與其他詞語搭配的錯(cuò)誤等。例如:

1. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised ...

2. He was looking for a glass the cupboard.

3. After autumn arrives，the city looks as an old man with leaves ...

4. ... he can no longer expect others to pay his food, his clothes ...

5. On the front door stood a five-year-old boy from across the street.

6. Could you share your experience f

or us?

7. My mother was a career woman and had her own problems to take care.

這類錯(cuò)誤多指a(n)與the的誤用，a與an的誤用。有時(shí)也表現(xiàn)為:單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前面該用冠詞的地方缺少冠詞，不該用冠詞的地方多了冠詞。例如:

1. An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the

balloon in 1784.

2.... the popular teacher is at same time the one who should be strict with ...

3. And if he breaks the law of society ..., he may go to the prison.

4.... so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun.

這類錯(cuò)誤主要為現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)與過去時(shí)態(tài)、主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)的誤用。做題時(shí)，應(yīng)注意把握文中動詞時(shí)態(tài)的呼應(yīng)規(guī)律，注意把握諸個(gè)并列動詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的呼應(yīng)規(guī)律。例如:

1. We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel before.

2. Today，I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.

3. We hung a sign on the front door that was read: “We’re having dinner ...”

4.... sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.

5. I’ll send my friend Charlie to meet you at the airport when you arrived.

這類錯(cuò)誤主要指主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí)，謂語動詞形式的錯(cuò)誤。因此做題時(shí)，要注意謂語動詞的形式要和句子主語在人稱和數(shù)上保持一致。例如:

1. “I just want to know what the sign say.”

2. Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.

3. Here are the information about Manchester University.

4. What may surprise you are that I’m going to ...

主要考查介詞與動詞、名詞、形容詞的固定搭配；副詞、動詞的固定搭配；及物動詞后多介詞或副詞以及不及物動詞后少介詞，英語中的一些固定句型與習(xí)慣搭配等。

1. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. keep a diary是固定搭配，意思是“寫日記”.

2. In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job.To one’s surprise 是固定搭配

3. I thought that was dull to watch a game… 此題考查it的功能，It + be + adj. + to do為固定結(jié)構(gòu)。

要想做好“短文改錯(cuò)”題，不妨試試分成“四步走”，遵循“四原則”，實(shí)施“四查法”。具

字逐行地進(jìn)行修改。

后再根據(jù)具體語境，仔細(xì)分析判斷，將注意力集中在較難的句子上。

用法要記�。痪渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)多分析，邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注”的口訣行事。

全文，并利用語感來做最后的判斷。

縱觀近幾年的“短文改錯(cuò)”題，正確的地方只有一處；多詞和缺詞的地方約有3處；用錯(cuò)詞的地方一般有6個(gè)，且多為動詞。這種比例或許也能幫助你做出最后判斷。

題要求每行只能改動一處，改動的方法可以是增詞、刪詞或換詞，但無論作何種改動，只能是增加一詞、減少一詞或把一個(gè)詞改成另一個(gè)詞。當(dāng)然，沒有錯(cuò)誤的行無需改動。也就是說，每行改動之處不能超過一個(gè)。

實(shí)詞的詞義，也不能將其改換成另一個(gè)實(shí)詞，更不能隨便增刪。例如:

① The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon ... (把keeps改為keeping) ② Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from ... (把clearly改為clear)

3至4處。這些需要添、刪的詞一般都是虛詞(如冠詞、介詞等)，不是實(shí)詞(如動詞、名詞等)，否則會改變句子的原意。例如:

① They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early ... (刪去that)

② He was looking for a glass the cupboard. (the前面加in)

應(yīng)該針對短文中的用詞錯(cuò)誤、語法錯(cuò)誤、邏輯錯(cuò)誤加以改正，不應(yīng)更改作者的原意。做到換詞不改意，加詞不增意，去詞不減意。如有多種改法，應(yīng)以保持原意為條件，擇其佳者而從之。例如：

But I have spent most my money, so I cannot… 改正：在my前加of。也有同學(xué)去掉most，這種改法雖改正了語法錯(cuò)誤，但改變了原意。作者想說的是“花掉了大部分的錢，而不是全部”。

還要看該名詞前面是否缺限定詞、該用何種限定詞，尤其要查名詞前冠詞的使用情況。當(dāng)名詞前面有形容詞修飾時(shí)更要加倍注意。例如: Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class. (把knowledges改為knowledge)

尤其要根據(jù)上下文所提供的時(shí)間信息，仔細(xì)推敲，從而選用正確的動詞時(shí)態(tài)形式。例如: (2006天津) I gained so much confidence that I go back to school ... (把go改為went)

應(yīng)在文中使用各種啟承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞。這些連詞能使文章在結(jié)構(gòu)上和意義上通順流暢。例如: It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. (把So改為But)

“理順”指行文邏輯符合人們普遍認(rèn)可的道理。例如: (NMET 2006) The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. (把第二個(gè)up改為down) 總之，強(qiáng)語言基礎(chǔ)知識的學(xué)習(xí)，多做有針對性的訓(xùn)練。

高中英語短文改錯(cuò)及答案篇三：2015年全國高考英語短文改錯(cuò)

2015全國卷1

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.

76. think –thought 77. countryside前加the78. or—and

79. on—with 80. been去掉81. seriously—serious82. airs—air

83. much—many 84. found—find85. your—our

2015全國卷2

One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

【答案】

71. parent改為parents72. on改為in73. very去掉74. looks改為looking75. where改為that 或者去掉 where76. begun改為began77. telling改為told78. a改為the79. saw后加his80. terrible改為terribly

2015四川卷

Hi, Janice,

It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out

together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me

many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?

Please help with me and give me some advice

Grave

1 want后加to 2 tell改成told

3. friend改為friendsmake friends with sb.和……交朋友表達(dá)中“朋友”

4. sing改成singing 5. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：many改成much

6. so改成but7. how改成what 8. ：are改成were

9. him改成them10. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案：去掉withhelp是及物動詞

2015浙江卷

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to theschool there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

1side-sides, 2 from-of 3 sit-sitting, 4easily- easy , 5is-was, 6them-it,7去掉not， 8 in a hurry 9felt- feel 10 if- although

2015遼寧卷

One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,‖How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.‖Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

71. parent改為parents 72. on改為in 73. very去掉 74. looks改為

looking 75. where改為that 76. begun改為began 77. telling改為told 78. a改為the 79. saw后加his 80. terrible改為terribly

2015陜西卷

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most ofthe baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, ―I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.‖My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

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